PeanutPhoebe

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Hey! Here to review this part for you so I can go on to Part Two! I have to say, this was an extremely creative and clever idea. I love ...

Thank you so much for your review! I apologize for that reference, and I really didn't mean countries like India! I meant more like tiny countries in Africa or South ...

Thanks you so much!!

I wrote this for the national VFW essay contest for high schoolers in which you write an essay using their prompt, and record it to send it in. It must ...

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO YOUR READERS??!! :) Right now I'm too tired to review this, so I'm gonna come back tomorrow to do it, if I have time...

Hilarious! I love it so much. You totally need to write another poem to the "M" from the mermaid!

No problem! And trust me, I know the feeling... :/

Hey!! Sorry I haven't reviewed this earlier, but I was on a trip with almost zero internet connection. I don't have a lot to say about this chapter; it was ...

Wait, what? I thought she knew George was here. He was the kid that Falyn followed to Akia, right?? I'm confused. But I LOVE this chapter, just like all the ...

Idk yet... We may end up doing it from several different POVs. The chapter 5 is done, and chater six is almost, so they won't be, but we shall see.

Thanks Abi! That does seem more logical. I think it would help a lot as well. The only thing is that I want to use that omniscient POV later for ...

Her brother is back!! Maybe now the memories about him will come into play?? Please post more soon, or I'm gonna die of suspense! I still don't understand while Akia ...

Thanks so much for the review!! I will keep it all in mind for when we edit:) No, Anna didn't quit, I just haven't been putting her name on for ...

Hey! I was gonna review this but I noticed you have some great reviews so I just gave it a like:) It's a pretty well written romance (and I don't ...

Thanks for the review! I'll keep it in mind for he we come back to edit;)