PeanutPhoebe

the formatting isn't the way it was when I previewed it!! grr...

Well, I disagree with you there. What I meant was that Christ did not worry at all about the pain, even if he did feel it. Also, as for Christ ...

whoops, i did it twice;) Trying out an idea for my title as a knight...

Hey!! And welcome to YWS:) So TheMessenger and whitewolfpuppy seem to have all the technical details, so I won't go over that. Overall, this is a very interesting poem, and ...

Oh, I see. I thought it was just autocorrect or something...

Thanks, I'll work on it.

PeanutPhoebe, here to review!! interesting!! i don't see how the moon goes with it. You split up the stanzas nicely, and have a good beat. You describe everything well without ...

Thanks!! Maybe this will answer this to everyone. The reason i have thrown so much into one chapter is because this is not the main theme of the book, more ...

Thanks!! Glad you liked it. I will look at the places you mentioned, and try to get to them soon...This is only my first draft, so... I'm planning on packing ...

yeah, pretty much, it's easy that way!!:)

i said to Joe, i want to remind you that this is only the first chapter of the book. I have plans to have a lot of adventure packed into ...

Thanks for the review... Let me remind you that this is only the first chapter, and i plan on having A LOT of adventure mixed into this story. this is ...

Thanks for the review!! I did realize that the formatting was off... Do let me inform you to not give me all the credit, cuz my friend anna actually wrote ...

Thanks!! We're happy to get reviews on it to help...ok, the panicking of being in a different world and things, as well as the sidewalk and gum...Rebecca isn't panicking very ...

Yeah, I was there!!;)