PeanutPhoebe

Ahh!! Last chapter you've got up! You better get crack-a-lackin on Chapter 19! Lol, just kidding, but I do wanna read it soon! Ooh! I love this so much though! ...

Here I am again! Ok, so this chapter was pretty interesting. (Like all the others aren't;) lol) Even though there wasn't a lot happening, you have us information. Like, how ...

Can't believe how many chapters you have! I agree with Holysocks. You shoulda played with the "who has to be sacrificed" thing more! I mean, obviously the time stop didn't ...

Ahh! No one can die! :( Like Deanie said, I'm glad I'm reviewing late and can find out right away. I agree with Akia about Fakyn, she's gotten so much ...

Ok. Im a little more calm now. I'm actually kinda sad her sister wasn't Akia. But I figured it would be Mina. Dont think I like the Zeke and Falyn ...

Oh wow! Are you saying Akia is her sister???? What?!?! Or is it Mina? Ooohhh!! You can't do this cliffhanger stuff to me! Ok. Rant over, sorry. I loved this ...

Hey! Here to FINALLY start catching up! So mad at myself for taking this long:/ I know I promised the other day, but I totally forgot while getting ready for ...

Hey, here to give you another review! Okay, I must complain again about the length of the chapter. It just seems too short! On to another thing. Although it is ...

Hey! Thought I'd give you a short review before doing your next chapter. So, this is a very interesting idea, and I think this is a great start to your ...

Hey! I'm gonna get right to the point. I have one nitpick, and that is that you said passed, instead of past. Again, I absolutely love the information you're giving. ...

Wow, ok...I'm finally here to review. I'm loving how much information you're giving now after so long. First off, the phone thing seems out of place. I don't remember you ...

Hey! I'm really surprised you're still in the Green Room, with how many comments you have! I'm sure at least three of them are long enough to be a review. ...

Hi! Here to give you a review on this cute (but short) story! First off, the only grammatical mistakes that I noticed were with the words he, himself, and him. ...

Hey! Here to give you a review. So, I love that this story is from the dogs Point of View. It really gets into the mind of a dog! However, ...

First off, THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for explaining. Things are actually starting to come together! I understand a lot more now...:) Anyway, I noticed just a few grammar ...