PeaceLuvPoems

A very nice poem! I really love the repetition in the beginning, and this poem flows nicely. I few things I would suggest: Maybe get rid of a few of ...

Wow, this is a very beautiful and nice! A few things I would suggest doing is to probably break up the lines more and not have such great line length ...

This. Was. Amazing. i really loved this story. And i skipped right over the gore since I was having as I was reading this. Just kidding. I read through all ...

The. Um. Storyline was so. Um. Unpredictable. Better change that up. He should have to fight his secret twin brother who was trained by gonrads not so secret twin brother ...

Oh my goodness! I really loved this! Your getting famous! You'll leave in your dust! OTL Just kidding. Anywho, I really like this (obviously) great job, as usual. I reall ...

Hey! I really loved this! Like, a lot. It was just so loving and filled with emotion. I loved how you SHOWED how much Cora loves her brother and not ...

Hi there, First off, know that I'm horrible at reviews and feedback, so dont expect anything great from me. I thought this was absolutely amazing.There was so much emotion in ...

I actually thought this was pretty cool! It seems like all the crossed out things at the beginning are the things the speaker wants to be and whats not crossed ...

Hi there, I'm actually really conflicted about this piece. I really like it, but there are some parts that are confusing and I'm not quite sure about. Before I really ...

Um... This was... interesting. I mean it kinda creeped me out, but it was intriguing and well-written. But through the entire thing, I was thinking, "Where's the blood coming from? ...

Ah... I really, truly tried to read this, but like DiskElemental said, you've got to put paragraphs in there. Reading a giant blob of words is kinda hard on people's ...

Oh, wow... this was pretty good. I know how it can a PAIN to come up with cool ryhmes that will keep the rythm. And let me just sau that ...

Like Ghostie, I can't exactly say that I get it, but unlike Ghostie, I know I liked this poem. I can't quite put my finger on it, but there's something ...

This was really great. There's really nothing that I can say about this, well, cause, I don't write this good! I wasn't exactly a fan of the 3rd stanza, cause ...

This was a cool poem, but for me, kinda confusing... but I loved the ryhmes and rythms of this poem! I especially liked this part: "Monster hunter, Monster hunter, Be ...