PatrickGibb

Whoooa. I'm reading this after reading your first two chapters and I'm still confused. It's a great prologue, having the mystery that a prologue should, as well as making a ...

Okay, I lied, I decided to read another section. And thankfully, it has improved drastically. I admit, I enjoy reading this as it holds my attention while at the same ...

I am not going to read another chapter of you're story, I'm afraid to say. The same mistakes of misspelled words and annoying typo's are there, as well as the ...

I'm afraid to say that you're writing goes downhill from the first chapter. It needed a lot more editing work before it came out as the grammar is so misshaped ...

First off, there's really no reason to mark this as Mature or 18+ unless you intend to write a sex scene later on in the story. I don't think putting ...

Okay, just read this one as well. The thing that I must say is that the expanding mystery of the equally expanding family tree is a very nice touch, and ...

This is the first part I've read of your novel, and I instantly want to read the prologue and second chapter. This parallel universe you've created is very interesting, and ...

This story has the chance to be great. It is intriguing, and as a fan of mythology, want to see what the outcomes of this meeting is. However, the writing ...

I thought this was incredible. Primarily, the description of the cemetery. As a reader who enjoys having clear pictures in my mind of the situation, I was in awe of ...