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Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 4
Hello again, Thundahguy, PastelSlushie here for a review for Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! As RoseTulipLiky stated, this is no where near your ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 3
Hello again, Thundahguy, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this fine Review Day! Let's get right into it! I really enjoyed the beginning of this chapter. It ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 2
Hello, Thundahguy, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day! Let's get right into it! Also, my apologizes for not getting these requested reviews in ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 1
Hello, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this fine Review Day. Let's get right into it! I really like Asha as a character right now. Her ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Little Moments
Hello, Mich4el! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! The first thing I want to point out is the majority of this story is in one big ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: One Planet Earth, Extra Crispy, Please!
Hello, FalconryGirl9086! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! The first thing I want to point out is how much this essay informed me about global warming. ...
Aug 24, 2017 -
Re: King's Curse
Hello again, Lumos, PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! One thing I would suggest for improvement in this piece is to make it longer and a ...
Aug 23, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Prologue
Hello, KayLou1609, PastelSlushie here for a review. And again, welcome to YWS, it's nice to see you have already posted something. Let's get right into it! As Lumos had said, ...
Aug 19, 2017 -
Re: Sacrificial
Hello, Lumos! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! First I will answer your question that you have at the end. First, the ending was definitely something ...
Aug 19, 2017 -
Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1
Hello, saentiel! PastelSlushie here for a review. I figured staying up a little later than usual to finish this review wouldn't do much harm. Let's get right into it! The ...
Aug 18, 2017 -
Re: A Daydream for the Patient
Hello, Aralynne, PastelSlushie here for a review. Also, a late welcome to YWS. Let's get right into the review. The whole entirety of the story was confusing. The dialogue is ...
Aug 14, 2017 -
Re: Empty - Prologue of Wanderer
Hello, PearlC10! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! NITPICKS 1) "Hi Ma!" I said to you. ^ Make sure to add a comma after hi. 2) ...
Aug 12, 2017 -
Re: I'm Not Fine
Hello, IPrevail! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! Also, again, welcome to YWS! NITPICKS (I will provide 8, do what you will with them) 1) “This ...
Aug 12, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Three (The Mate Between Brothers)
Hello, BaileyMatwiww! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! I also haven't read any of the previous chapters, so my apologies if any of the points I ...
Aug 11, 2017 -
Re: Isaac
Hello, AnimarretWriting! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! NITPICKS (I'll provide 10, do what you want with them) 1) He made a desperate attempt to cover ...
Aug 10, 2017