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PastelSlushie

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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter One

    Hello again, KayLou1609, PastelSlushie here for review number seven for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I believe I have read the prologue to this a while back when it ...

    Sep 5, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: Is There Hope After Failure?

    Hello, AJloveswolf, PastelSlushie here for review number six for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. If you have ...

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Awake

    Hello, elleeyyy, PastelSlushie here for review number eight for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! This had been lingering in my review drafts section for quite some time so I ...

    Sep 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 -read the prologue for the story-

    Hello, AriannaC, PastelSlushie here for review number five for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I believe I have reviewed the prologue of this a while back, like, a while, ...

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Orange Asiatic Lilies pt. 1

    Hello, rosette, PastelSlushie here for review number four #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I want to get my one complaint out of the way before I shower this story ...

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 11

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for review number three for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! The beginning of this chapter has some nice detail of what Asha and Yuni ...

    Sep 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 9

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for review two for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Ah, it seems chapter nine has been recovered. I'm confused now, haha, rip. This review ...

    Sep 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 10

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for review number one for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, my apologies for the sudden pause in reviews for this - busy schedule ...

    Sep 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 8

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this fine Review Day. Let's get right into it! I really enjoy how more of Asha's backstory and ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 7

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! I'm really starting to get a good sense of ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 6

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review for Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! Despite this chapter's short length, you managed to show ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 5

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! Before I start anything else, I need to point ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 4

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review for Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! As a sort of the third echo from BlueAfrica ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 3

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review from Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! The one thing that really needs to be pointed ...

    Aug 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 2

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for a review for Team Autumn on this lovely Review Day. Let's get right into it! The first thing I noticed was the length of ...

    Aug 27, 2017


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