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PastelSlushie

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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 4

    Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 23 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Issues) I don't see how this chapter really fits into the story. It went ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Today I lost a Friend

    Hello, jimss23, PastelSlushie here for review 22 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Before anything starts, I am very sorry for the loss of your friend. I know what ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 3

    Hello again, jamgalloway, Pastelzslushie here for review 21 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Nitpicks) As IcyFlame said, Logan refers Luke as both Lucas and Luke as well. I'm ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 2

    Hello again, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 20 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it so I can go to bed! Nitpicks) This is more of a question than ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1)

    Hello, jamgalloway, PastelSlushie here for review number 19 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I've seen chapters from this series floating around the website, and it really interested me, ...

    Sep 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: estranged

    Hello, soundofmind, PastelSlushie here for review number 18 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Before the actual review starts, I would like to point out that I'm just now ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: my demon

    Hello, neptune, PastelSlushie here for review number 17 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Before the actual review starts, I would like to say that I am just now ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Phoenix Has Risen

    Hello, IAmthePhoenix, PastelSlushie here for review number 16 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! It's great to see you've already posted something. Also, before we ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Film, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night Chapter 12

    Hello again, Stormcloud, PastelSlushie here for review number 15 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it, and let's get this out of the green room! This chapter was really, really ...

    Sep 10, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Orange Asiatic Lilies pt. 2

    Hello, rosette, PastelSlushie here for review number 14 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Before I begin anything, this was very emotional, sad, and sweet all at once. Okay, ...

    Sep 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A truth, a lie, and a half-truth

    Hello, ardentlyThieving, PastelSlushie here for review number 13 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! I'd like to point out one little thing before the actual review starts. The format ...

    Sep 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sippy Cup

    Hello again, graphiteshimmer, PastelSlushie here for review number 12 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! Okay so I know this is sort of introduction to this and I didn't ...

    Sep 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Chapter 2-Dollhouse

    Hello again, graphiteshimmer, PastelSlushienhere for review 11 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it, shall we? The first thing I feel needs to be addressed are the house symbols throughout ...

    Sep 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: Chapter 1-Cry Baby

    Hello, graphiteshimmer, PastelSlushie here for review number 10 for #RevMo! Let's get right into it! The first thing I feel needs to be addressed is the lack of warning. There ...

    Sep 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Politics, General Re: Don't be afraid

    Hello, TornRoses, PastelSlushie here for review number nine for #RevMo, as promised! Let's get right into it! Before the actual review starts, I would like to say I'm not a ...

    Sep 7, 2017


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