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Re: The adventures in Htrae (Chapter 1 )
Thank you so much. I am grateful to you for the advice. Thanks once again :)
Jun 3, 2017 -
Re: Disgrace
Thanks for that
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Unfulfilled dreams
Don't like it you should warm on it
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Ghost
Hi I am prakhar. The title attracted me towards your poem "ghost", it's a good one but in laast paragraph fist line if you used "can't" in place of cannot ...
May 27, 2017 -
Re: The Girl in the Hall
Hi I am prakhar your title is a good one but yup have to work on your poem still i like how you described that eyes and all that but ...
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 3
A good. One but you poem but you should give a catchy title to your poem
May 27, 2017
