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Parkahar

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The adventures in Htrae (Chapter 1 )

    Thank you so much. I am grateful to you for the advice. Thanks once again :)

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Script » Film, Dramatic Re: Disgrace

    Thanks for that

    May 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Unfulfilled dreams

    Don't like it you should warm on it

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ghost

    Hi I am prakhar. The title attracted me towards your poem "ghost", it's a good one but in laast paragraph fist line if you used "can't" in place of cannot ...

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Girl in the Hall

    Hi I am prakhar your title is a good one but yup have to work on your poem still i like how you described that eyes and all that but ...

    May 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Blackout Poem number 3

    A good. One but you poem but you should give a catchy title to your poem

    May 27, 2017


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