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Re: Our Dysfunctional Support Group: Chapters 1-4
Heya! I noticed that your new to YWS, so welcome! If you have any questions don't be afraid to ask me, I usually don't bite. The Review! Plot First things ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Never trust the Neighbors
Heya! I noticed you've just recently joined, so welcome to YWS! If you have any questions don't be afraid to post them on my wall, or PM them to me. ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Bullies
Hey, BEWriter! Red Alert: I sometimes get a bit blunt in my reviews. I don't mean it to be taken personally, I'm just trying to be helpful. It's usually because ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 10.1): Special: Arianna
Hey, EnderFlash! I don't know how I didn't see this sooner! And hey, don't beat yourself up over having not been able to finish this. I can take up to ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Kevin and Shoko - Chapter 1
Hey, xJupiter! I'm excited to see that you posted this! I'm going to try and focus on this alone, and not compare it to Paper Planes. Anyways, onto... The Review! ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Fallen Princess [Part 4]
Hey, Lightsong! I saw this in the Green Room and thought I'd give it a review! I apologize in advance for any typos, I'm writing this review on an Ipod. ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Don't Lie To Me
Hey Dustbunny14! The Review! Plot This honestly was a pretty beautiful piece. I can totally relate to the different things that are being said, but I won't go into much ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Chapter one: The dead city
Hey, chris1312! I see you're new, so welcome to YWS! If you need help with anything, don't be afraid to post on my wall or PM me! I promise, I ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Hear My Voice
Heya! I can't think of an opening sentence so... The Review! Plot Ok. So. This isn't the most original idea in the world, but I think you've portrayed it well ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Disputatores- Chapter 3
Hey, ChocolateCello! I was super excited when I saw you tagged me for this chapter! I'll try (and most likely fail) to not put crazy suspicions in this review as ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Through The Middle, Episode 5: Bitten
Hey! So, last chapter I focused on the plot. For this chapter I decided I would focus on the typos youv'e missed, since the plot was basically flawless. Magenta stifled ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Through The Middle, Episode 4: Focus
Heya! Happy Review Day! I haven't read the chapters before this one, so I'm sorry about that! The Review! Plot So, the plot of this was good. There was two ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: This Business of Love (Chapter 5: The Clown, Experimenting)
Hey! Happy Review Day! Well, onto... The Review! Plot I didn't like this chapter as much as the previous ones, but it was still good. This one just seemed to ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.3]
Hey! Happy Review Day! I've previously read the other chapters, and this one. I looked back over this one before writing this, but didnt re-read the parts before this one. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: One Mistake
Hey, Happy Review Day! Sorry it took me so long to get to this! I haven't read the other reviews, so sorry if I repeat anything! The Review! Plot Your ...
Sep 27, 2015