Paracosm

Hey CaptainFinnick! I'm going to do a quick review. I'll focus on character, the body of this story, and idea. I'll tell you what I liked about your story under ...

Hey Sparkle! Well done, I enjoyed this poem. I liked how you formatted it to have that rhythmic, rainy effect. One thing did stand out, Watery state was this break ...

Hey Panda! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review of your poem. I will say I don't feel that an E rating is appropriate for a poem ...

Hey Junaid! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. But first, I don't think you should put this poem in bold. It's okay to put the title ...

Hey State! This is a very interesting poem. Right off the bat, the first thing I noticed was that at times the punctuation was split up from the actual sentence. ...

Hey Alex! I couldn't quite tell if this was supposed to be angry or humorous. I suppose that's up to the reader. When I read this poem, I skipped over ...

Hey there Henry! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. The first stanza starts off by telling us what moving from being an intellectual to an artist ...

Hey MB! Poetry is all about expression, and you do a great job expressing the way you feel through this poem. One thing I'd suggest is using more imagery, metaphor, ...

Hey Shoaib! I liked your poem, it's very interesting subject matter. You provide a beautiful description of the lake. One suggestion I can give over the description it to use ...

Hey there Pepsi! Welcome to YWS, I really enjoyed this poem, so I'm going to give you a quick critique. I enjoyed the imagery of this poem, you have a ...

Hey Amanda! I'm going to give you a quick review. I enjoy horror, so this review should be fairly helpful. I'm going to go through and talk about three components ...

Hey Kay! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. I'm not good at poetry, but I'll do my best to point out your strengths and weaknesses. If ...

Hey Blacknether! I'm going to do a quick review. I'll focus on three assets of fiction that I consider important. Voice, idea, and word choice. I'll touch on your strong ...

Hey there Magpie! I must say, your title drew me in. I'm going to give you a quick stanza by stanza review. Overall, I enjoyed this poems sense of beat, ...

Hey Myst! I'm going to do a quick review. I won't get into grammar, you have it down fairly well. Primarily watch out for run on sentences. There are also ...