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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust pt.1

    Hey, ReisePiecey. I'm back for a review, as promised. I'm sorry I didn't return to do one earlier, but the last two days have been busy as hell for me. ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Art » Narrative, Realistic Re: Clarity

    Interesting...I'm not sure what to make of this. It's a very odd piece, and I've never read anything like it. That's good, actually. I like originality. Is this actually written ...

    Dec 11, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: That's what you get...a bad love !

    Hey, pal. Pan is here to fry and help you with your piece (I'm sorry, I always start reviews with bad, pan-related puns). Soo, let's look at the positives. This ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: It's Me. Your Greatest Friend.

    Pan is here for a quick review, and, let me tell you, she is very impressed. This is a fantastic idea. It's brilliantly original, and I love the way that ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Other » Action / Adventure, General Re: Bow & Arrow: Chapter One

    Salutations, CharlotteGrace. Pan is here to cook up a review for you (I'm sorry, I start all my reviews with bad puns). Soo, I went back and read your prologue, ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Technology, Mystery / Suspense Re: What if the World fell to Robots? (W.W.R.) Chapter 1: Our History- The Change

    Hiya, GreenTulip. Pan is here to pan der to all of your reviewing needs. Firstly, let's start with the positives. I think you've got an interesting idea here; robots, war, ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Summer Romance--Chapter 1: Sparks

    Hallo, sir. Pan is here for a review. On the whole, this was a pretty solid piece. I spotted very little errors in terms of grammar, spelling and such-like. The ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Changing Legacy: Chapter 1 - Disheartening

    Hey, Deifyance! Pan here for a review. I've not been on for ages, so excuse me if I'm a little rusty. Right, what I'm going to focus on in this ...

    Dec 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Unknown Planet Chapter 2: Angrom

    Hey there, Jordin! Dark here for a review. :D I'm going to try and keep it fairly brief, because I'm tired and creaky and my gaze is lolling and I'm ...

    Apr 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A Game till the End

    Heya, Rosan. This was actually pretty disturbing, but I really enjoyed reading it. I guess it appealed to my inner sadist, so you've certainly got a lot of warped imagination ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Seven Sheep

    Hiya, YouTranslated. :) Now, I'll plunge right into this review. When I read your little synopsis, I must admit I was intrigued. The idea of telling the story from so ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Mind Worth Losing: The Rain's Song (Part 1)

    Hey, FallingUpIntoTheRain, welcome to YWS! Nice username by the way! I'm Dark, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. :D Firstly, this isn't half bad. What I understood of concept ...

    Mar 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: That Girl

    Hey, EatSleepRead, welcome the YWS! I hope you're settling in well. :) Now, I might come across as a bit harsh in this review, but I really do just want ...

    Mar 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1

    Well, that escalated quickly! Okay, seeing as I'm tired and I've got school in the morning, I'll make this review short. Now, I'm not saying the piece is bad - ...

    Feb 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: Clockwork Kiss ~ Part 1

    Hey, Stigma. Dark here to review. :D Firstly, I've got to say that I really like this. It set the scene excellently, and though not a lot happened in it ...

    Feb 27, 2013


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