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Re: Wanderlust pt.1
Hey, ReisePiecey. I'm back for a review, as promised. I'm sorry I didn't return to do one earlier, but the last two days have been busy as hell for me. ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: Clarity
Interesting...I'm not sure what to make of this. It's a very odd piece, and I've never read anything like it. That's good, actually. I like originality. Is this actually written ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: That's what you get...a bad love !
Hey, pal. Pan is here to fry and help you with your piece (I'm sorry, I always start reviews with bad, pan-related puns). Soo, let's look at the positives. This ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: It's Me. Your Greatest Friend.
Pan is here for a quick review, and, let me tell you, she is very impressed. This is a fantastic idea. It's brilliantly original, and I love the way that ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Bow & Arrow: Chapter One
Salutations, CharlotteGrace. Pan is here to cook up a review for you (I'm sorry, I start all my reviews with bad puns). Soo, I went back and read your prologue, ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: What if the World fell to Robots? (W.W.R.) Chapter 1: Our History- The Change
Hiya, GreenTulip. Pan is here to pan der to all of your reviewing needs. Firstly, let's start with the positives. I think you've got an interesting idea here; robots, war, ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: A Summer Romance--Chapter 1: Sparks
Hallo, sir. Pan is here for a review. On the whole, this was a pretty solid piece. I spotted very little errors in terms of grammar, spelling and such-like. The ...
Dec 5, 2013 -
Re: Changing Legacy: Chapter 1 - Disheartening
Hey, Deifyance! Pan here for a review. I've not been on for ages, so excuse me if I'm a little rusty. Right, what I'm going to focus on in this ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: The Unknown Planet Chapter 2: Angrom
Hey there, Jordin! Dark here for a review. :D I'm going to try and keep it fairly brief, because I'm tired and creaky and my gaze is lolling and I'm ...
Apr 13, 2013 -
Re: A Game till the End
Heya, Rosan. This was actually pretty disturbing, but I really enjoyed reading it. I guess it appealed to my inner sadist, so you've certainly got a lot of warped imagination ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: Seven Sheep
Hiya, YouTranslated. :) Now, I'll plunge right into this review. When I read your little synopsis, I must admit I was intrigued. The idea of telling the story from so ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: A Mind Worth Losing: The Rain's Song (Part 1)
Hey, FallingUpIntoTheRain, welcome to YWS! Nice username by the way! I'm Dark, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. :D Firstly, this isn't half bad. What I understood of concept ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: That Girl
Hey, EatSleepRead, welcome the YWS! I hope you're settling in well. :) Now, I might come across as a bit harsh in this review, but I really do just want ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 1
Well, that escalated quickly! Okay, seeing as I'm tired and I've got school in the morning, I'll make this review short. Now, I'm not saying the piece is bad - ...
Feb 28, 2013 -
Re: Clockwork Kiss ~ Part 1
Hey, Stigma. Dark here to review. :D Firstly, I've got to say that I really like this. It set the scene excellently, and though not a lot happened in it ...
Feb 27, 2013
