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Hey! I'm Pan, and I'll be delighted to review your work today. I do have a tendency to ramble in my critiques, so I'll try and keep to three main ...

Hiya, Djinn! I'm Pan, and I'm here to cook up a review for you today. ;) I like the premise of this story. It's a good idea, and a school ...

Hello there, greyalschwis! I'm Pan, here to mix up a review for you. Okay, I'll start off with the positives. You've got a solid, dramatic start to the story and ...

Yo, avinash. Welcome to YWS! I'm Pan, and I'll be delighted to boil up a review for your first piece of work. We'll start with the positives, shall we? I ...

Hey, IamTraunt. I'm Pan, and I'm here to fry up a review for you today. We'll start with the positives, shall we? And there are a lot of them. For ...

Hiya, RavenMoonStone. I'm Pan, and I'm here to whip up a review for you. I went back and read your first chapter so that I could get a full understanding ...

Yo, xfabulisaa! I'm Pan, and I'm here to deliver my first review in months. I might be a little rusty, but I'll do my best. The first thing I want ...

Hey, methrirr123. I'm Pan, and I'm here to review your work today. (I'm loving your avatar by the way. Just thought that I ought to get that out). This prologue ...

Hello there, ZLYF! Pan is here to pan der to your every reviewing need. This was certainly a different kind of piece. It was interesting to read from the perspective ...

Okayy...hey there, Lostthought. I'll be reviewing your work today. If I could pick only one word to describe this, it would be horrifying. I'll be honest, this is a very ...

It has to be said: there isn't too much that I can say about this because there isn't too much of it! As ConverseFireGirl says, it's far too short to ...

Are you sick of the sight of me yet? I hope not, because I'm here to review again. I'm still intrigued, and I still want to read on, but I ...

Hello again! I'm back to review, as promised. Again, as I always like to start with the positives, I'll begin by saying that I think this chapter is definitely stronger ...

Are you really eleven? My god, reading this created an image in my mind of someone five years older. You have a very sensitive and mature style for your age; ...

'Lo there, AsanteVilicia. Pan is here to cook up a critique. So, let's start with the positives. I love a good murder mystery, and this one seems fairly interesting. I ...