Panikos

Hi, BaileyMatwiiw. Sorry for the delay! I've been either busy or recovering from lack of sleep this weekend so I haven't got around to reviewing anything. Another interesting chapter. The ...

Hi, Dragon! Great to see the return of this story. My YWS routine hasn't been the same without it. Seems like a lot of new plot points are coming to ...

Hi, BaileyMatwiiw. Back again. You know the drill by now. Nitpicks first, overall thoughts after. I will preface this by saying that this chapter is of similar quality to the ...

Hi, Lumos. Pan here to fry up a review for you today. It's a good little story. The opening drew me in straight away and you held my interest throughout, ...

Hello again! I thought I'd pop in for another review. This chapter shows a lot of your strengths - the dialogue is strong, and you capture the normality of Oakley's ...

Hi, LittleBird8060! I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a review for you today. First things first: have confidence! You've nothing to worry about when it comes to how good ...

Hi, Bailey Matwiiw! I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a quick review for you today. I've read the revised version of the prologue so I'm up to date with ...

Hi, MotherVirgo. You requested a second review so here I am. This is miles better than the first draft. I can see that you've tightened up the pacing and taken ...

Hi, kman134! Pan here for a quick review. Good to see some more work from you. It's a promising start to the novel. It gets straight into the action, doesn't ...

Hi, MotherVirgo. I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a review for you today. I like the premise of this. Physics aside, the idea of an enormous planet intrigued me, ...

Hi, Dino! I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a review for you today. This was a charming read. There's something sweet about it, and I love how deftly you ...

Hi, LukeStarkiller! Pan here to fry up a review for you today. I like a bit of astronomy and history, so this was an enjoyable read for me. You've got ...

Hi, 0325564! Pan here to fry up a review for you today. This is a cute little piece. I like the idea behind it, and for the most part your ...

Hi, Dragon. I've been eagerly anticipating this new chapter! I'm sort of in two minds about it. I like that it's longer, actually - it gives you more space to ...

Hi, SamohT. Welcome to YWS! I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a review for you today. This piece definitely held my interest. It's got a mysterious, surreal quality to ...