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Re: Listen
Good! I liked it, but it was kind of hard on the eyes to read with all the quotation marks.
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Broken
I love it!!! The lines: "We were perfect,We were in love.We made mistakes, And we gave up" really spoke to me and I almost got goosebumps! It just shows how ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: can't get over you!
Your poem is really neat, I especially liked the layout because it made it a little more exciting to read. Although I wasn't a fan of the surplus of the ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: The present
Hahaha this was great. It was random indeed, but very enjoyable. I love the construction and rhyming. It's very fun and a nice read. Great job.
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: It's Funny
I've never been a fan of really repeitive poems. Also, some things you write sound almost cliche... It isn't bad though. Keep up the good work.
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: I Could Write a Poem for You
I liked it for the most part, but I agree with the other "reviewers" that some rhymes sound forced. But I really liked the part: Use words like ‘scars’ and ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Hahaha, I really enjoyed this. I laughed throughout, and I thought it was really cute. Good job :]
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Submerged in Fear
Thanks a lot for reviewing my story, I'm glad you liked it. I'll take what you said into consideration :] I actually wrote this for a writing class of mine ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: My Guiding Light
Thank you so much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: I'm afraid of Halloween.
This is just wonderful. I love everything about it. There's lots of great images and I feel your fear when I read it! But that might be because I'm a ...
Oct 31, 2008
