PandaRawr

okay. I had a lot of my friends read this, and they all interpreted it differently. A couple of them did take it as suicide, and it's great that they ...

I think this is really good. The thought behind it is one I find very interesting as I can never seem to keep my mouth shut. On the actual poem ...

I think this is pure genius. It definitely makes me want to look back at all of my poetry. It's different that's for sure. I like it. There's not much ...

This was interesting. It was so vivid that i could almost feel it. Your descriptions were amazing and didn't sound forced. You made your rhyme work for you instead of ...

Mac, this is great. I just finished Romeo and Juliet in English 1, and i loved it. This is like it in the obvious ways but much better too because ...

oh wow. That was good. You first need to draw it out more. More detail is a definate. I think the story is original, with the boy. I like the ...

Okay so I haven't been on latley, and just stunbled across this. I'll admit I almost didn't read the rest after the first paragraph, but I gave you the benefit ...

Oh My Freaking God! How could you end it like that? I need more! Soon. Please P.M. me if you decide to continue it. P.S. Ummm... sorry for the fact ...

Brilliant. The best writing is when you feel strongly about it and you can convey that emotion to the reader. I felt a lot from this. At the end I ...

Ahh. This was pure joy. Well it was actually very dark but it fills me with joy how beautifuly and well written this was! I absolultley love this. There is ...

I really enjoyed this. It sounds just like what i'm going through at the moment. I can not ever say how much this means to me and for the moment ...

I really liked this. The dramatic tone was better than most I have read because it didn't seem like the POV felt sorry for him/her-self. I have no nitpicks. Continue ...

all i have to say is ............more! please keep me informed when you post more and plese do. post more i mean!

I LOVE this. One nitpic. You said the words are choppy and do not flow smoothly but they in fact did. the story that was being told ebgulfed my vision ...

Well this was a good peice. I loved the way you ended it. the whole baby dying thing was a good twist, but the last line was perfect I think. ...