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Yeah, maybe you can try an indent for each stanza, just to see how you like it! And you're welcome ^^

^~^ What can I Say? It's great. I wanted you to publish it xD

My nieces, actually. The italicized words are words that me, the narrator, are confused about. Though, I should fix it..

Thanks! I'm a simple girl, so my poems are simple xD

Thanks! And I will.

Thanks!

Thanks, and the mistakes with punctuation, and then capitalization are because of the fact that I changed the poem around to change the flow, and forgot to change the punctuation. ...

Yay!

Ah, I fixed it, so please tell me what you think now!

Thanks so much! This means a lot because I'm a bit shy, and so I don't normally post anything, and I wouldn't ever think that I could write something at ...

Ah, so that explains it. xD I'm not good with symbolism, but now I understand.

I'll look into fixing it, I just couldn't think of anything that would fit. -___- Thanks for the review, though! I just wanted to get it over with, and it ...

Beautifully written, and I almost cried. It's sweet and saddening at the same time. Great job.