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Hi there! I love the way that this is written, it makes it hard to believe how young Kimberly is. As I read this, I felt for her- confusion at ...

Let's see here. I'll try my best! "Long walks along the beach Isn't as romantic as I once Thought it was" First, let's address the issue of plurals. As I'm ...

I find that I relate very closely to parts of this. The beginning. The lies. The father. The sister. From my perception of this poem, it seems like the family/another ...

I don't actually understand this, which is weird. Are you saying that Lucifer is male? Don't get me wrong, it was a lovely poem to read, however I'm a tad ...

I don't actually have any nitpicks, which is surprising. (This is my first review in a little while so bear with me). I feel like I relate with this very ...

To start off, this is pretty funny. 'Hate' is funny too, but not in the same way. I feel like this one delves deeper into the satire aspect- whereas the ...

Okay, I have to say 'wow'. I love how well you captured the essence of the characters, because I can really see them acting in the way you've portrayed them. ...

Hey, sis. Captain Pan here with a review. Even though I haven't had any experiences like this, and you know that, I still feel a twinge of nostalgia when I ...

This is chilling, and it really takes a good story to chill me. I have goosebumps. Wow. Though it's a good plot, you might need some revising. Snap! I let ...

Heya, Memsie. First off, I sense that this goes really deep, and I hope the things you say in here aren't really true. No parent should ever feel like their ...

Really strong feelings from Pen, because I relate to this poem very easily. I understand what the narrator is trying to say, and it can be frustrating. I really think ...

Hiya! You have a good vocabulary base. They way you word certain parts makes me really happy. Now, to start off my review, I really think you should change the ...

I'm starting by saying that this is well written, and the grammar is impeccable. The style really draws me in, and it makes me think, 'okay, so they know what ...

Pen here with a review-day gift! HI! Again. This time, you're using a lot of your senses, the candles, the smells, the feel of the pages. Good. Supped- I think ...

Pen here for with a review, just for you! Hiya Raven! First off, I want to commend you on how much I relate to how you began with this. I ...