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Re: Orange
how you described something so simple like an orange and made it have feelings and emotions is so creative, never thought about an orange feeling so vulnerable after it’s been ...
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Re: something hollow to hold
This poem made me feel bad for a haunted house:( is it really haunted or just lonely and sad with a need of comfort knowing someone wants to live in ...
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Re: Don’t ever fall in love.
Just the title to me was intriguing because you never really know what it might end up meaning, from the very beginning to the end I was captivated by your ...
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Re: Zachary
Wow! Enjoyed your story, from each character introduced to how they’re portrayed. The way you describe environments and feelings is great, I would have loved more dialogue from mom and ...
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Re: i can feel the heart breaking as one
I love the way you describe emotions, you can almost feel it as you keep reading. It’s short and descriptive with pain and discomfort with every line. This is a ...
Jun 20, 2025 -
Re: Circus Grave
Your poem is deeply moving and filled with heartfelt emotions. The imagery you use, like the sweet cats kiss and the cup of Boston Tea, adds a touch of sweetness ...
May 13, 2024 -
Re: or something (cry me a river so i can sit in silence)
Your poem is incredibly powerful and evocative. The way you express your emotions and thoughts through your words is truly captivating. I can feel the depth of your feelings and ...
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Re: Daydreaming
As the room goes dim and you feel yourself drifting off, your words beautifully capture the experience of entering a different realm of consciousness. It's fascinating how this state can ...
May 13, 2024 -
Re: i visited our childhood home (you weren't in it)
Your talent is absolutely mind-blowing! Seriously, the way you bring characters to life and build intricate worlds is nothing short of amazing. Your writing style is so engaging and descriptive ...
Apr 11, 2024 -
Re: The Eighth Sibling
I must say, your poem is truly captivating. The imagery you use to describe the queen lying in wait and the fearsome servant hiding in the violence is so vivid ...
Apr 11, 2024 -
Re: The Kind Boy
First of all, I want to commend you on the depth and emotion in your writing. It's clear that you have put a lot of thought and feeling into your ...
Apr 11, 2024 -
Re: for "you"
Oh, I absolutely love this poem! It's like you've taken the emotions and thoughts swirling inside and poured them onto the page. The way you've portrayed the narrator's obsession and ...
Apr 11, 2024
