OxfordandOnyx

Well, I said I would try but I can't promise you I'll come out with anything insightful, poetry... is not my thing :P But there's no harm in giving you ...

Forgotten, here is your review as requested! :) You wanted a harsh reivew so first of all. The massive info dump at the beginning of the piece is a little ...

Hey there! Thought I would give you my take on your poem :) First off, I really liked the first three lines as they were fluid and rhymed nicely and ...

Hi there Herzing! Thought I might drop in my person take on your poem! :) Nit-picks that erupts at black bird's twilight. The first two lines of your poem are ...

Hey there ozasatya! First off, I have to warn you that reviewing poetry isn't something I'm good at but I thought I might as well try and give you my ...

Hello there! I'll start by saying this was an interesting read and had me asking a lot of questions, though many of them were left unanswered. That leads me to ...

Hi Aqua, nice story! I enjoyed reading this. The description you've used is beautiful and you really helped me paint the picture of tranquility. I take a long, deep breath ...

Hi LukanRinta! First off, a quick question. My molecules spun Her molecules spun? Can you explain what you meant by this? I also assumed this was a prologue. However, if ...

Hi Loveless! First, I have some nit-picks :D The dim light that creep in through the window threw ghastly shadows across the floor. Wrong tense, should be 'creeped'. Just to ...

Hi Puppylover! (: First off I have some nit-picks. I have blond hair, and hazel eyes. I love drawing, painting, and jogging. I think you could re jig these sentences ...

Hi, OxfordandOnyx here to review (: Okay, so first of all... I hate drinking alone. ...But your character is dead, (or he was not too long ago) so how does ...

Hi lava! I really enjoyed this chapter! I've read it about two times (once last night and again today) so now, I shall drop you a review! (: Oh, how ...

Hi, OxfordandOnyx here to review (: I'll start of by saying even though that paragraph of 'deformed human' description was quite a chunk, you described that thing well- I was ...

Hi (: OxfordandOnyx here to review, though please note this can only be an extremely quick review as I am off to bed soon! We were halfway down the street ...

Hi! I just thought I would give this great story a little review :D Then the phone went blank. Bodies of Angad and many other were never recovered after the ...