-
Re: Founding Rome: A Sanders Sides Fic [Prologue]
Ox here for a review day review! And don't ask me how but I am the first to review this beautiful piece so here I go! Also I still relearning ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: .
Hello there! Ox here for a review day review I am getting back into the swing of things so bare with me at times! So you did ask for spelling ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Take it all for us
Hello there, Ox here for a review. It's been a while so we'll see how this goes! Firstly just a grammar suggestion, "Juno is sad, she wants to feel something ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: The Prince of Nigeria- Chapter 1
Hello there ox here with a review General comments- Even though I am sure you've heard it a million times, Show don't tell. In fact you did pretty good with ...
Jan 6, 2019 -
Re: A stain, in all it's splendor.
Hey there, Ox here for a review Critiques- One so there were grammar and spelling mistakes but we all make them (especially me in fact I just misspelt especially) I ...
Jan 5, 2019 -
Re: My Hometown
Hello there, Ox here for a review. General comments - I know everyone says this and you have probably heard it before, but show and don't tell. We have lots ...
Jan 5, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 4
Ox here for one last review before tonight ends and it going to be a quick one (hopefully I can write one of substance soon but I am not the ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 3
Here for another quick review: Comments- The bands ensured that each animal had a protective pocket of air around them that was the appropriate temperature for their natural habitat, and ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 2
Hey there biscuits so here we go comments- Chip slowly looked up and beneath a deep frown locked eyes with Patrick. "That would be good." Patrick grinned."Alright then." - some ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 1
Hey there Biscuits and my god can I just say this short novel is a life saver for my goals of 4 reviews so I fully plan to review 4 ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 2 Patrol
Hey there here for another review!!! General- SO like last time I must say a few things in general that I address specif examples in my nit picks 1 I ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: It Happened in the Middle of the Night.
Hi, I'm Oxara, here for a review Interpretation Let's start with interpretation; the story about the lover's distress of her lover's death brought her to her own end is rather ...
Jan 1, 2019 -
Re: The Risen - chapter fourteen
Alright I haven't read any of the previous chapter's so keep that in mind but I'll try my best! So I am going to make this a rather quick review ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: In Dreams We Wander
Hey there Adedlaide Ox here for a review. Before then I am just going to say I am not the best at poetry and this will be the first poem ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death Chapter 1 The Sand Wyvern Fort
Hey there Shikora! I've wanted to tackle this story for a while and well when's better then on review day. It's been a while since I've reviewed anything and even ...
Dec 30, 2018
