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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Founding Rome: A Sanders Sides Fic [Prologue]

    Ox here for a review day review! And don't ask me how but I am the first to review this beautiful piece so here I go! Also I still relearning ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: .

    Hello there! Ox here for a review day review I am getting back into the swing of things so bare with me at times! So you did ask for spelling ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Take it all for us

    Hello there, Ox here for a review. It's been a while so we'll see how this goes! Firstly just a grammar suggestion, "Juno is sad, she wants to feel something ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The Prince of Nigeria- Chapter 1

    Hello there ox here with a review General comments- Even though I am sure you've heard it a million times, Show don't tell. In fact you did pretty good with ...

    Jan 6, 2019
  • Art » Dramatic, Horror Re: A stain, in all it's splendor.

    Hey there, Ox here for a review Critiques- One so there were grammar and spelling mistakes but we all make them (especially me in fact I just misspelt especially) I ...

    Jan 5, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Hometown

    Hello there, Ox here for a review. General comments - I know everyone says this and you have probably heard it before, but show and don't tell. We have lots ...

    Jan 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 4

    Ox here for one last review before tonight ends and it going to be a quick one (hopefully I can write one of substance soon but I am not the ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 3

    Here for another quick review: Comments- The bands ensured that each animal had a protective pocket of air around them that was the appropriate temperature for their natural habitat, and ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 2

    Hey there biscuits so here we go comments- Chip slowly looked up and beneath a deep frown locked eyes with Patrick. "That would be good." Patrick grinned."Alright then." - some ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Secret of Tayburn Zoo: 1

    Hey there Biscuits and my god can I just say this short novel is a life saver for my goals of 4 reviews so I fully plan to review 4 ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death Chapter 2 Patrol

    Hey there here for another review!!! General- SO like last time I must say a few things in general that I address specif examples in my nit picks 1 I ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: It Happened in the Middle of the Night.

    Hi, I'm Oxara, here for a review Interpretation Let's start with interpretation; the story about the lover's distress of her lover's death brought her to her own end is rather ...

    Jan 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Risen - chapter fourteen

    Alright I haven't read any of the previous chapter's so keep that in mind but I'll try my best! So I am going to make this a rather quick review ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In Dreams We Wander

    Hey there Adedlaide Ox here for a review. Before then I am just going to say I am not the best at poetry and this will be the first poem ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Life or Death Chapter 1 The Sand Wyvern Fort

    Hey there Shikora! I've wanted to tackle this story for a while and well when's better then on review day. It's been a while since I've reviewed anything and even ...

    Dec 30, 2018


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