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Re: My very clever stupid doggy.
First thing is it is remarkable that anyone would do a poem about the perspective of another human or being and you have chosen one that is actually quite simple. ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Haiku
I remember Haiku's I did them in Primary school and although they were not always about food, they were just as interesting and I find it fascinating that you made ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution: Who's That Pokemon? - Alexander Shader
It is a interesting piece of work bringing the idea of Pokemon that has not been heard of for years into a interesting passage about a Pokemon named Alex although ...
Feb 17, 2014 -
Re: The World's First Ostrich (written in 2002)
Have you read Just So Stories by Rudyard Kipling well its stories are kind of the same thing and what i am saying is that you should right more cause ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Legend of L'Karr Stone: Rise of the Mech-Warriors (Chapter 4)
Its impressive once again you have impressed me with your basic knack of story-telling and writing i like the idea with a new world with a new cast of characters ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: The Battle of Thermopylae, as told by Lycrus
This piece of the War was absolutely epic it is one of my favorite confrontations in history between the Greeks and the Persians and the Spartans were bred for War ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: Knights of the Crimson Kingdom: Exiles of the Fall (Chapter 1)
Quite the story i must say set in a fantasy time on a fantasy world and its quite the conjuring with a mixture of Modern day slang and thinking with ...
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: An Angel Came
Breathtaking, amazingly described of the character's emotions and of his pain and suffering from being excluded and outcast-ed. Plus many people can relate to this as they experience a lot ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: bullying needs to stop.
Its absolutely brilliant you bring to life a real life issue to the paper and when you show it or say it to people it really "blows the roof off ...
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: The Ring's Secret. Chpt. 1-4
I like the story its a kind of combination of Harry Potter and with a bit of Dracula mixed together to make a really good story lots of descriptive language ...
Dec 6, 2013
