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Hello, Stormblessed here! Great chapter! We're getting more of a feel for Fen and Valarian, and the story is coming along great as well. Few mistakes, and a couple of ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Good story so far! Definitely a LOTR feeling to it, if that's what you were going for. There are barely any mistakes, so I'll point them out ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Great chapter! The tension's really rising! There are a few mistakes so let's get right to it. He didn’t particularly like the way he swooned at everything ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This story is really coming along! Natalya is a very headstrong, firm character, and i like her a lot. StarlitMind caught most of the mistakes, but I ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I just caught myself up on this story, and your writing has definitely improved! Your rythm is more consistent, and some of the awkwardness is lessened. There ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow. I am amazed at this story. It's well written and I can't wait to see where it goes! I really like this "shadow of a man." ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Ir really like this story! Your writing is poetic and beautiful. I especially like Valarian. I don't have many corrections, so here you go. Rocks jutted up ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Believe it or not, I can relate to this poem! When I was younger I would debate with myself whether to do something dangerous just to see ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a great prologue! There is some dry humor, which I like, along with good story telling, which compliments you're theme. There are a few mistakes, ...

Hello,Stormblessed here! This is a nice start! Theres a bit of an info dump towards the end, but it's still fun to read. I personally love worldbuilding, and you're doing ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I really cannot wait to see where this goes! You have an interesting plot and a lot to look foward to. On to the nitpicking. I didn't ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a fun little read! It's a cute and creative story. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, which I'll point out for you. I'll ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Let's get right into it, shall we? Most of what I noticed were small typos, so make sure you go over the story again. Stuff like the ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I'm loving the story so far! Unfortunately I do not have time to write a whole review, but I'll drop what I thought about it. Your characters ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a very honest little piece! You reflect your emotions well and deliver a great message. There are a few corrections I would make, so here ...