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Hello,Stormblessed here! Yay! Chapter 15 is here! I am really enjoying the story so far. You're writing skill really has improved. The only problems I found were mostly spelling and ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Huh, this was an interesting read! A little odd, but an interesting concept! Its ways fun to see someone like that put out of their element. I ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! These were a great read! You have well sculpted characters that are intriguing and exciting. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! I only ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, this was a long read, so I am not going to write down all of what I found. You're main problem was grammar and redundancy. There ...

Hi, Stormblessed here! This was a very interesting story to read. It's a great idea, and stories like that are fun to write. I found some mistakes, and I'll write ...

Hi! Stormblessed here! This story is really cute! The writing style really made it sound as if a little girl was telling the story. I don't have a lot to ...

Hi! Stormblessed here! Once again, I really enjoyed this story! You wrote it well, though it did feel a bit rushed. I mean, she just met these two people, and ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! 👋 There is so much beautiful imagery in this story! You did a great job of painting pictures with words. With the story you put in just ...

Hi! Stormblessed here! I enjoyed reading this so much! It took a little deciphering since there is no punctuation, but it added a nice rant feel to it. The only ...

This is so well written! I myself had wondered what would've happened if Iroh hadn't known Zuko was alive, and I was comparing it to Anakin Skywalker burning in Revenge ...

I'm all caught up! You're still missing a few commas, and when the stranger was interrogating the other man, it was a little unclear about what was going on. Maybe ...