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Most people have bad habits, and tend to cut their speech short, not make it longer. They're not people, they're Elves, and as such, their speech patterns are different.

That's kinda the point.

The explanation is pretty simple for him being there right on time. He's been tracking/following her through his forest since she got there and decided to step in before she ...

No offence June, and I truly don't mean any here, but the entire intention with Seante was to show the views of an entire culture. In the culture I am ...

*snort*

It's always a good idea to spell the title correctly :) I believe you meant "Mirror"

Her mothers cruelty travels into later chapters, I promise. This was sort of to show that her mother played a big part in her overall view of herself *nods* (hope ...

i know this sounds bad and is bad but i wrote it really quickly and didnt really bother too do much editing. it's also my first time writing about,,, that ...

Once again, I repeat, the lack of emotion was intentional. Read my above statement if you wish to see why.

Thanks guys. Not sure if I am going to continue this one, and if I do it probably isn't going to happen for a while. I appreciate the advice though ...

Try here for the same topic. No need to start a new thread, I think there are already a few for Twilight.

For those that are questioning my characters ability to feel no emotion please read a tad bit more on Antisocial Personality Disorder Apparent lack of remorse or empathy; inability to ...

I enjoyed it as well, though not one of my favorites it was interesting. The concept is pretty great, I have to admit.

Right now, I'm not even sure why I need to continue reading. I can tell you exactly what's going to happen – Benjamin and Vanessa will fall madly in love, ...

Everyone is complaining that they don't know where I am going with this, perhaps it is just me, but if you knew where I was going after the first few ...