OverEasy

Prologue “I’ve loved you since freshman year. I want us to be together. I love you.” She told him everything. She’d kept it in for a long time but she ...

Actually anything and everything can be considered poetry. Just because there are few line breaks or stanzas does not mean it is anything less than a poem. The thing this ...

I love this! A few lines that really stuck out in a good way. Life-giving death and death-giving life reflected in the affray of light. Descendents blessed with the side ...

The first thing that I noticed is that your writing style is very blunt (there is nothing wrong with blunt I assure you.) However here it comes off a bit ...

Thank you Sam for saying exactly what I was going to say :P. Poetry is a very hard form to master, and let me tell you I am far from ...

In order to save another life, would I have to exchange in my own? I think you need to change the end of this. It sounded odd to me. Maybe ...

This is a very basic outline to a poem. But as others said it's a very good start. Try expanding on it and give us (the readers) a visual. Something ...

I think it was pretty good. Very well written, however the first two paragraphs explaining it was a little... annoying. I didn't need to know all of that stuff, the ...

Um, well I feel that it is okay to write this because it's about me . I don't really know what to say; but here: Your cheeks are puffy from ...

Hey again, I guess I am reviewing another poem of yours :) So first things first, please don't put the title in all caps, it's very distracting and also against ...

I kind of agree with the last post, I am sorry to say. It's a hard topic to do because it is done so often, so you have to think ...

Everybody nose Is this supposed to be "knows"? Where it goes In your clothes Up your nose Do you no where it goes? The stuff in your toes or on ...

Maybe it's a dream...or maybe it's a nightmare you don't really need all of the "..." they don't really add anything significant to the poem and they get distracting I ...

For some reason I keep coming back and reading this, it makes me smile... which it really shouldn't. However I just wanted to let you know that I think this ...

"It smells like dog shit " < I love this line, it was a shock the first time I read but in a nice way. I guess it was just ...