Published March 29, 2008
Everybody nose
Where it goes
In your clothes
Up your nose
Do you no where it goes?
The stuff in your toes or on your clothes
Or maybe even up your nose
Who nose where it goes?
Weather its up your nose
Or on your clothes
Or even in your toes
You can always take it to go
Do you no what it is?
Maybe you should take a quiz?
Or maybe it is all a fizz?
Who nose what it is?
It can be faulty
Sometimes it taste salty
It can be malty
Its your personality
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It was a cute little poem with a hidden little message at the end, but like I said up above the rhythem seemed a little off. Like you were trying so hard to rhyme that you forgot the poem it's self.
Quirky and mocking rhyme, but light and easy to read. I liked it, but there is not too much I can say about this. It was good.