OutOfInk

It's good. It kind of looks like you've been thinking about this for a while.

Ok thanks :D

I liked it, I love little short-nothings, I write them a lot too. I can tell it needs work. I didn't exactly get a good grasp on the meaning but ...

Thanks...

Yeah. I actually wrote this a long time ago.

No my daddy's still livin. It just kinda came to me one night.

I liked how you spaced the words, very creative.

Mmm... I realy liked it. It sounds like I nice place. P.S. is that a real picture of you? If it is then your realy prity. :smt001

It's kind of depressing but not really in an emo way. It was all right though. :)

It's cool, I like it when I know i'm dreaming.

I enjoyed it. I don't see what it has to do with romantic fiction but i thought it was prety cool. I would have posted it in Poetry...

Kinda' creepy but I enjoyed it a lot.

Kind of wierd but in a cool way...