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Helloo... Once I finished reading this, I kinda realised there were a few things on my mind. First the line : That’s simple, Ivy waited in her sick bed. When ...

Hello... Hmm.. First and foremost, I want to just maybe suggest a few things for you. When I first read it I didn't realize it was a conversation. So maybe ...

Hello.... This really is food for thought. Once, I read it fully, I kinda just sat back and thought about it, and to imagine that almost none of us are ...

Hello... Wow. Just Wow. This story is really fantastic. I really liked the second last paragraph in which all the sentences start with 'Perhaps'. It really delves into my mind ...

Hello... The plot for this story, I believe is quite simplistic, so that it appeals to all. The unresolved ending with the dream, for me I find it to cliche ...

Hello... i kinda noticed that you kinda refer to yourself a lot but i think that this story really relates to everybody. While I was reading this, an image of ...

Hello.. this is my first time reviewing so yeah. i really like the way that most of the story is dialogue, you can really picture whats happening in your mind. ...