OrionRising

I actually can't understand this. Wait! Don't disregard this review because I said that. Because I totally understand this but I can't decided what to say about it. I liked ...

I really like this poem! Its short, simple and to-the-point but contains some really good symbols and meaning in it. I really like the whole idea that we are immortalized ...

In terms of poetry, I didn't find this particularly interesting. To me it seemed like any other teenage poem. If you want to improve a few things you want to ...

Happy review day! I promised this to you a few days ago and then got pretty busy. So here it is! I don't exactly like it when something starts off ...

Well, happy review day! I didn't read the first chapter of this but from what I read here I love it! Its intriguingly deep with a hint of developing symbolism. ...

This is an intriguing little poem. Not necessarily a brilliant masterpiece but also nothing terrible. So I'm going to break it down quickly. The first thing I realized was the ...

So to be brutally honest, I didn't really enjoy this piece. First of all, the grammar was terrible. I understand that english may not be your main language but if ...

Just going to do a quick review: Truthfully I do not think that this work is very great. It is a compounded of cliches and sappy love-stuffs. Now don't get ...

Alright. So, I don't really agree with NaRachel at all. First off all, I don't find your song to be very good. Sorry, but that is the truth and it ...

This is certainly a very wonderful piece but I am going to tear it apart as best I can. If I were you I wouldn't expect much feedback from me ...

Okay well I read this about three times in a row and here were just a few of my thoughts. I inhale deeply to cut Deeper into the bare wound ...

(Please tell me what you think. It was a quick write, to refresh my brain and keep my writing skill active. Just comment on whatever catches your eye. Thanks- Brie♥) ...

A secret kept A secret lost Another entrance to the room cut off. But I say I get in there some day I really don't think that this line makes ...

Bluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh. This needs work. ------------ Can you love me The way I want to be loved? Can you touch me The way I want to be touched? These first four ...