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OrabellaAvenue

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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Shadow of the Orange Tree

    Oh my gosh thank you so much! I didn't expect you to review anything of mine, but it means a lot! A review is definitely more than enough of a ...

    Jul 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Precious in Wonderland, Not So Much Instead (Comeback for 2024)

    Hmm to answer your question I'm not really sure? I think just taking the story and twisting it in kind of a dark way with the rabbit stew was interesting. ...

    Jul 11, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Vast Cerulean

    AHHH! The poem "Blooming Forget-me-nots" was beauttttifullllll. The ending, the goodbyes and hellos? Ah! Too beautiful! Too good! And goodness, your way of rhyming is awesome you do it very ...

    Jul 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Precious in Wonderland, Not So Much Instead (Comeback for 2024)

    I love Alice in Wonderland! This poem took so much from that and made it even more awesome - a little more sad, too. I really like your style - ...

    Jul 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Umbrella

    Thanks again for reading and reviewing some of my poems! I was shocked that I received reviews on stuff and I got so excited. :D Thank you for your interpretations ...

    Jul 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Tear Stains On a Pillow

    Aww, thank you so much for the review, Ellie! :) I like what you said about being hurt and broken, it's true and sad and beautiful.

    Jul 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Pandora Shattered. ( Slightly revised.)

    Ohhh no that makes a lot of sense! I just wanted to point it out in case that wasn't what you wanted, but actually I love that interpretation (or I ...

    Jul 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: A Place No Human Should Live

    Ahh no you should go to sleep!! (To be fair, I was writing this at 12am and stood up longer than that after I'd written this review XD) Oh yes ...

    Jun 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: A Place No Human Should Live

    And due pardon for the genre, I don't really know what it is. Relatable :D Now I really don't like the note. I feel so self conscience about it, whyyyyyyy. ...

    Jun 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ou + topos

    I don't actually know how I came up with this poem hehe Relatable! Thanks for the explanation, and ooh Greek roots are fun, and huh I didn't know that either! ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Literature Re: Death and Destruction [Ch. V, Nine]

    I'm happy to be here! I'm so happy that I can help, even if only a little. Your replies are so sweet, and they brighten my day. ^^ So, thank ...

    Jun 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: I Knew Chapter 1

    Thank YOU! I've never had someone react this positively to a review I've done before, and seeing this made me smile, and I was feeling pretty down before, so thank ...

    Jun 19, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: The League of Life [Ch. IV, Nine]

    Jit, I like it! I can't wait to find out who is evil... I'll just have to read on! Also, I didn't know that about Achilles and Patroclus; interesting! Thanks ...

    Jun 19, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Fabrication: Shikri - Day 2

    Yeah of course you can call me that! (Can I call you Toast? Or would you prefer Mr./Mrs. ToastK the First, Writer of Fabrication: Shikari and Eater of Toast? XD) ...

    Jun 18, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Dear Human: NOT a Turtle

    Aww, thank you so much alliyah!!! ^^ I can't believe it's been a year since I wrote it... I guess not it make sense again! XD

    Jun 16, 2024


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