OrabellaAvenue

Thank you so much for reviewing! And yeah, the tortoise is saying all the dialogue. Sorry that's not clear, but I think I'm gonna go back and fix that. As ...

Aww! Thank you so much! I realize the last stanza is a bit confusing, and it's nice that you told me why. I might go back and fix it... yeah ...

Of course! Any time.

Thank you so much! And to answer your question, it's still the tortoise talking. I guess when I wrote it, I imagined that "Orabella" had just told her tortoise friend ...

Thanks!

No problem at all! Stress is definitely something you have to deal with in writing. And that's great that you want see it to the end. Perseverance! Only, don't push ...

Of course! And yeah, I came up with it on the spot. Honestly it's kind of a mishmash of my username and... I don't even know what. I've been known ...

Oh cool! (I have a lot of self doubt too, and I almost always second guess my second guesses.) It's so nice that you're dad helped you.

Oh cool! I'll have to read them.

Thank you for reviewing!

Aww, thank you! This means a lot to me.

Oh, wow! Thank you! Honestly, I haven't really lost anyone either. (except for my grandfather, but I never knew him well) It means so much to me that this was.. ...

Oh, cool! I didn't know that. Well, I just wanted to let you know in case you didn't notice, but again, I do really like it the way it is.

^^ Thank you!

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked it; honestly I wasn't expecting anyone to comment. I love everything you said. You have no idea ...