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Re: The Countdown: first part
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a quick review. Wow! You sure are a poetry master. I'm seeing your poetry everywhere! In the forums, on your wall, in the literary ...
Sep 26, 2023 -
Re: Pretend for the Placid Palace (PftPP)- Chapter 1.1
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. This is such an interesting start to a story! I love your characters thus far, and I can't wait to learn ...
Sep 25, 2023 -
Re: Dance With the Devil
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a review. Today, I'll be reviewing using the YWS S'more Method! Normally I'd love to listen to your playlist, but I am currently unable ...
Sep 24, 2023 -
Re: Fog
Hiya there! I'm Orabella, here with (and unfortunately short) review. First of all, welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. If you ever need anything, I'm here and so ...
Sep 23, 2023 -
Re: The promise of a seed
Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. I'll be reviewing with the YWS S'more Method today! Which for some reason I haven't done until now. I always love your ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: Missing Her ~ Ch: 4,5 & 6
Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. I'm so glad you posted more of this story! I love reading it, and I love seeing where you're taking this.
Sep 21, 2023 -
Re: Experiences: 13
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. At first I thought "Gorge" said George. George? Who's George? I don't know a George. (I think) I also thought that ...
Sep 20, 2023 -
Re: Monster
Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a short review. This is incredible! Just like your Time & Space story, you've again created a magnificent story with your words. But yikes! ...
Sep 19, 2023 -
Re: Missing Her ~ Ch: 1,2 & 3
Hiya! I'm Orabella, here with a review. I see you're new here. Welcome! It's always nice to see a new face. (Except, we never see faces, so...) It's always nice ...
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Re: you will only grow cold if you reminisce of the warmth
Hi again! This is Orabella here with an (unfortunately) short review. Does everything you write turn out amazing? Because thus far, it seems like it has. I just gotta say, ...
Sep 17, 2023 -
Re: Stardust
Hi! This is Orabella here with an (unfortunately) short review. I. Love. Space. And astronomy. Stars. Basically anything that's in this breathtaking universe. So this was a special treat for ...
Sep 16, 2023 -
Re: "Don't Cry"
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. I absolutely love this poem! The repetition of the "crying" and the "don't cry, don't cry" is amazing. It adds another ...
Sep 15, 2023 -
Re: unnoticed
Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a quick review. First of all, I gotta say that these rhymes are amazing. They're not forced and they flow wonderfully throughout. I sure ...
Sep 14, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 16
Hiya! This is Orabella, here with a review. Ahhh. Ahhhhhhh! AHHH! I feel like a should've suspected this. I mean, this all started happening just after Keith turns into a ...
Sep 13, 2023 -
Re: 2 am thoughts
Hiya! This is Orabella here with a short review. This is a really good poem! I love the onomatopoeia; it really makes me feel like I'm in this dreary place. ...
Sep 12, 2023
