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I actually don't think Stranger meant waste of points in a negative way. Like he was explaining, this would be better suited as a wall post/blog post. These kind of ...

Ahh that makes more sense. I can't ever tell different writing strategies and all of that. I don't know if you intended on the more clunky sentences in this story ...

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Thanks so much for the review! As for Mako talking the Zhu Li, it could've been done a lot better I think. This is my first time trying to seriously ...

I was literally about to come on here and make the exact same comment. :P

What he's implying is it's sugar-coated, not sugar coded :D

Hi there! Thanks for the review. I wanted to reply to this because I actually typed out the first part of this on my phone, which is the reason why ...

Okay, so I've not wanted to reply to this, but I see that there's been some kind of mis-communication here that's going on here. First of all, I'm not sure ...

Well, I made it that way for a reason haha. I don't really know why I did that, but I did. I'm glad you like it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Fixed, and I'm glad you liked it!

The fact that he's giving this to a homophobic teacher amuses me. This sounds like something I would do.

This is amazing. The feels. THE FEELS.

Hey, thank you for the errors. On the last one, that's called a compound sentence, and it is actually a fine sentence. In fact, it wouldn't be right if I ...