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I'm pretty sure "can not" is one word... That was a depressing poem. I think I've read too many of those today. I think it was for the most part ...

I love finding fellow Christians, it's really comforting. :) There was some good imagery in there, good comparisons, too. It was a good length, but a little wordy in some ...

That was probably the best poem I've read all day. Such a good message and so well written, too. The rhyme scheme was beautiful and everything flowed wonderfully. I honestly ...

I know very little about Star Trek, but I have to say that was splendidly written, I would love to read more from this story and I think the tension ...

That was a good start. I think you should really work more on this one. It's got feeling and emotion attached to it that leaves your audience hanging. Your format ...

I loved the names, very different. The story was well written, too. It was an easy read and that makes it all the better. I think you should go into ...

Why do people have to be such good writers?! It's not fair.... so if you didn't already get the message, I loved this! Very potent and well written. :) But ...

Yup. That is exactly how I feel. Very good imagery and nice vocabulary. Although, reading through the other comments, I have to agree that you did use a lot of ...

That was deep. I really enjoyed that one. This one really flowed too, I can't stand it when a poem becomes a struggle to read, but no, this one was ...

That was really good! At first I didn't like it, probably because this isn't my reading genre, but the detail and thought process was well done. There were a few ...

Keep writing! I feel like that wasn't finished yet! I would like to here more from this poem. It sounds depressing, but still intriguing. I want to know how this ...

Sounds cool! I like the beat and tone you've set. It really livens things up. :) If I wer to give you one bit of advise, though, it would be ...

Good poem. Kinda depressing though. However, if you wanted to expound on that, I would add some imagery. You might also try personifying the candles a little more. Rhyme schemes ...