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Wow! One of my characters is called Xanthe too. I love this name. I really like the concept of this storyline and I agree with Confetti – you've left enough ...

I loved this! I'm not normally a fan of short stories but I really liked how you twisted this classic. You're imagery is great & I can really feel the ...

WOW! I loved this. I love the relationship between your main character and Johnny. The saying "love is blind" really comes across here. I also really liked the way you ...

I really loved this! I'm not normally a big fan of short stories but this dragged me in! By the end I wanted it to be more than a short ...

Hi there :) I really like your concept. There's not many books that I have read where we get to see through a killers eyes. I like the way you ...

You have no idea how close this is to my heart. I chose 'Night' for my degree dissertation...10,000 words! This is haunting - just like Night. If you ever have ...

Hello :) I really like what you've done with this - it's as though neither can live without the other even though the music can always find another dancer. I ...

Hello :) I really like the potential with where this story could go. I'm a fantasy/supernatural junkie so my minds already racing as to where you could take this. I ...

This really caught my attention as I have never read anything like this before. I usually go for the airy fairy types! I love that we're getting to read things ...

Ooops I was supposed to post that comment up here - still learning how to navigate this thing. I really loved reading this! I really like the way you've set ...

Hello. I love fantasy writing so I was more than happy to read through yours. :) I really liked the start of this Chapter. The opening sentence is short and ...

Hi there. I'm by no means a poet so I can't give you any solid advice. I really liked the imagery with the 'shimmering ribbons' and the 'fine desserts'. I ...

Hi. I didn't see the court room coming at all and I was pleasantly surprised! I've never read a book with this type of setting before so I'm definitely interested. ...

Hi. I really like this beginning and seeing as I'm a fantasy writer myself, I'm more than happy to give you some notes! I really like the mystery surrounded NOVA ...

Hello, I am also writing a fantasy novel about Elementals so I was really interested in reading your prologue. I immediately noticed that you take a lot of time and ...