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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    Hi there! I saw that you had a couple of comments on this piece of work but not a meaty review as of yet. I'm here to fill this job ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Taking Flight (Part One)

    Hey, girl! :D Here to return the favour. I come bearing reviews! :) “If she couldn’t think, she couldn’t argue.” - I love this line. I wish we could have ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Real American Woman, ch. 5

    Hi there! Here to review your chapter this evening! Forgive me if I get confused at any point as I haven't read any of your other chapters. Here goes! I ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Indian South African girl

    Hi there! Here to review your poem this evening :) I'm in no means a poet so I can't really help you out with the technical side of things! I'm ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: love inside you

    Hi there! Here to review your chapter this evening :) I will review as I read so that it will make a little more sense to both me and you! ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Awake Part 5

    Hi there! Here to review your chapter this evening :) I will review as I read so that it will make a little more sense to both me and you! ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Horror Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 1 & 2

    Ok – So I'm finally here! Been totally busy with my first week back at work. ARGH! Exhausted. I will review as I read so that you can see what ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four

    Hi Sushi! Olive here as promised :) I will get to reviewing right away! I loved this chapter – I think it gives us so much important information and no ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Faery Tales: Part 1- Willow's Story

    Hello! Here as I said I would be to review your first chapter. :) I love that you've done something different with the fairy world! It's nice to see them ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act Two "Super Freaks"

    Only me :) Ready and excited to read act 2! I'm so glad you put it up here so fast! I'm loving this Gabriel dude. I think it makes him ...

    Aug 29, 2013
  • Script » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Shades: Episode One, Act One "Super Freaks"

    ROBBIE! :D Here to take a look at your new script, as so sweetly requested. I've read the entire thing and I loved it! You get the comedy/action balance perfectly. ...

    Aug 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: A Love Story Gone Wrong

    Hi There dutifulwriter! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your short story for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Catching Feelings

    Hi There officially! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your first chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Voiceless

    Hi There Fortis! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your short story for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Capital

    Hi There alliteddy! I'm here as part of the Green Lanterns Team to review your chapter for this fine review day! I will review as I read so I can ...

    Aug 25, 2013


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