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I like it!It's a beautiful play on words. Short, but a very fun read.

Well I think you did a wonderful job. I was really able to relate to this.

I like it! This is like something I would listen to. You wrote it? Lyrics and music? It's good, at least in my opinion. : )

Thank you. That means a lot to me. : )

You are correct! That is how I intended it to be. Yes, I seemed to have missed the first line in my final editing. And thank you, I'm happy you ...

Thanks! : D

Thank you for pointing that out. The first line wasn't reedited when I was going though a final touch. It should be in present tense now. You caught me, yes ...

Thank you very much. I'll see if I can reword it to flow a bit better.

Thank you. :)

No problem, and I'm glad to hear that you're doing better now. (:

No problem at all. It was a god read. : )

Thanks again. I hope I didn't confuse you. : )

Thank you. : ]

Thank you. And the reason is because everyone reads a poem differently; more specifically everyone reads poems with a different rhythm and different pace/flow to it. So if the author ...

Thank you. : )