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So, you're not an emo, but you describe yourself as... an emo. Hmmm... Oh dear

It's a very good paragraph... ...but it's just a paragraph.

"tainted arms" seems kind of off mostly because I wasn't sure why the arm would be tainted...didn't seem to fit in with the mood of the poem" - "tainted" means ...

"like this poem full of rhymes and with those edges and rhymes." - ruined a most spectacular piece.

"That, and the apostrophe before "'cello" kind of bothers me. It's something that really shouldn't bother me, but it kind of does. It may be a regional thing, though." - ...

Very good, I assume that "Bethazel" is the new Evergreen. It sounds much better. Nice plot device. "Finally!", if I may be so bold. Keep it coming.

Rewritten: (Not) My Friend A hand-shake, “Hi, I’m Charlie” And it begins. Now, as friends, We can share all Rumour, tales and Fun, and the shame Of embarrassment will Not ...

I intended this piece to resemble a piece of music. It starts slowly, as Claudette says, because many pieces begin with a introduction that picks up pace gradually. The whole ...

"I didnt like how you often ended with a preposition or a contraction. "and" or "the" isnt really meaningful." - that was deliberate, I am trying out this new style ...

Six pieces in a row? You might want to consider limiting yourself to one a day.

That's alright and I respect the way you think. However, I have one question: why? I just want to know what made you like them so much.

Three cheers for KazSmurf. I was just wondering how large the Eragon fanbase was, so I could compare it to other books and authors. Does anyone know?

The lessons would not reflect how good the book is. I agree that it is annoying to pore over a book endlessly picking out every tiny detail, but this doesn't ...

Sorry, I haven't read it, but have you considered breaking this down into several, smaller chunks. I'm faced with sheets of writing and it's quite daunting.

To me it's not ambiguous and it has a defined meaning. In fact, I see no ambiguity here at all. I think that Mad meant he could not decifer the ...