Odyssey

This is a fabulous poem, especially being a first! There was one particular part that shook me: " It’s always so much easier when the pawns don’t have faces, and ...

I love this poem, fantabulous work! The twist at the end is a really great catch, and the writing and rhyming is great. However some paragraphs don't have the right ...

This is a great essay! Even though I am more fluent in dog and jibberish, I can definitely understand the majority of language used in the text. Firstly, I am ...

Ok, a few things. Lemme see... It was a bright, sunny, casual day. Bob, a tall, popular, likeable young man who really had a knack with the ladies was standing ...

Hey, EscapeToNeverland c: It's a great piece of work. Scary, but that's how it's supposed to be, right? A sort of Sci-fi-horror-fantasy theme, I suppose. However I've got a few ...