NovaRose

When I read poems like that, I imagine that the author has an intended reader, and not that he's just writing to whoever the heck happens to read it. And ...

Wow, this is great. Sorry for my lack of words, I'm feeling rather silent right now.

I love it! I like how you did those bold lines, too. I don't quite feel as sad as I think I should, but I don't know if it's your ...

What? No I didn't... *shifty eyes*

Sounds pretty cool. On the other hand, it seems to be brainwashed by the anti-media, if you know what I mean. But yeah, very good point and symbolism!

Next time I get on the comp I'll bring my outline. And since you asked, I'll finish it up, as well. I just hope I can get my muse back ...

Don't bother reading the rest, lol. It's all gonna change soon enough. Maybe next time I'm here at the library I'll post new versions. I wish I had more time ...

I have no idea what that means, but I'm glad you like it. Maybe when I get a Mac (and therefore GarageBand) I'll put it together so you can hear ...

Thanks. I like upbeat too. Which makes it ironic that some of my favorite songs are punk rock lol.

Heh, I'll never be able to keep up with Hunter. Although he does have a bit more than I do to take up his time... Not to mention I can't ...

I tend to be an upbeat person. I really like this song after how ever many years it's been since I thought of it. I like Senseless more, though.

Hey, this should be in the Lyrics forum too. Heh. Thanks for commenting. I personally like repetition, or at least anaphora like that. Next time I'll put my poems or ...

It could be a song. But really, what are songs but poetry with a tune? I guess not all poems would work as songs, but this is supposed to be ...

Well, this one isn't really a song. Maybe it is. I'm not sure which place it would belong. I moved my real songs, though. This one might have been a ...

I like it. But I agree that it feels too short. You should add more verses.