NovaRose

Chapter 2 Author's Note: You may have noticed by now—in fact, you should have noticed by now—that Slash is one of those signature Fan Fiction heroes; he's way cooler than ...

Awesome, thanks for the reviews. Chapter 2 is actually done, but I, uh... left it in my other pants. Haha.

So, you're proclaiming yourself God, then? Because you seem to think you understand wise men, and thus understand God. You are also assuming that God's vengeance is a result of ...

Sometimes you change the subject you're describing without telling us. Quick example: James is holding a soda. James has a problem. It is too big for him to handle. See ...

I looked at this poem, saw "Is it ok?" like a million times, and died. It's okay (pun not intended) to repeat something, but not so frequently! Tone it down ...

TI-89 TITANIUM BABY!!! When you're bored, play Kirby or Mario Land! :D

That's awesome, Grif! What goes around comes around, eh?

With regards to the rhyme thing, I personally never thing rhyming works unless you have a constant rhythm or meter as well. When it rhymes, you expect the same number ...

I'm the third one to sing, and the one at the very beginning of the whole thing.

I agree with Crysi. I really liked this poem, but that Oh my God line seems more like you couldn't think of what else to put there. Awesome work!

Interesting lack of almost any punctuation and pretty much no structure, but I liked how it was just kind of a flowing of thought, and it had a pretty funny ...

I feel awkward posting twice in a row, but I can't just edit my last post since that would change the whole content lol. You do definitely have a better ...

My roommate is gonna teach me to play guitar, so when I can, I'll post one with guitar and voice, instead of my boring old voice.

It would probably sound cool with the music. LOL, things do really change when you have your own background music in your head but not in real life. When I ...

Hm... That might have turned out to be a better topic for my essay, but I don't think I'll have enough time to change my topic altogether. I'm mostly looking ...