NovaRose

Oh, and sorry if I sounded like I was just pciking out errors and not reviewing. I got kicked off before I could say how much I liked this story. ...

Cool. That is not the end, I hope? I don't quite understand it, but I like your writing and such. Is it raining blood? That reminds me of 8 Bit ...

Hey, Tess, it's probably a good idea to post these things a bit at a time. Like one chapter. People (like me) are more likely to read a bit at ...

I've never read any of his books, but I've met him and got his signature, so booyah!!! He and David somethingorother made a crazy movie called Mirror Mask , and ...

Wow, that is really sad. Is this guy OCD'd or is he just a weirdo? Man, there's very little I despise more than people who act one way to get ...

On the other hand, there are more fingers. Additionally, although it might be foolish, it is likely that a large number of people believe in something because it's true. Truth ...

CAG77, you're crazy. Enjambement is one of the greatest techniques in poetry. Although I do agree that one-word lines are bad. Each line should at least have one concept, and ...

---“We must get you and the out of here.” That line is missing a word between "you and the" and "out of here." ---"Inside was a fair-haired, beautiful young maiden; ...

I don't really see why people like Shakespeare so much; his writing doesn't impress me too much. Pretty imaginative ideas, though. Anyway, the best thing about studying him in 10th ...

That last part of the story reminds me of that song "Elmo's Got a Gun" It was pretty funny, but I don't really like it when people take popular shows, ...

I'l have to take this book in steps, so here are my comments on part 1 of chapter 1: first of all, it starts out pretty good except a couple ...

A slight tingling sensation runs courses through his body sending shivers up his spine. The phrase "runs courses" sounds redundant. And I still think first person is better for parts ...