Northstar

hello! I hope this reveiw is helpful and I'm not trying to be mean so hope i don't come across as that.. firstly the grammar, -sometimes you mess up with ...

hieee okay so i have not read anything written by you other than this. the grammar was almost perfect but you had a few spelling mistakes in the starting which ...

I liked it. It was simple and not overly drawn out or like constantly sad, it was realistic. You managed to portray that being lonely isn't always sad, it's just ...

I don't usually read poetry unless it's something I have written but I read your tittle and had to. Believe it or not I can relate to every line there ...

Firstly, I have to tell you I liked the title, it was interesting and then the story itself was interesting too. It reminds me of the pedophileic swingset in the ...

Heyy Okay, I feel like you didn't pour enough energy and time into this one, maybe you didn't like the idea too much or thought it would be a waste ...

heyyy okay, so firstly your grammar is perfection and thats really good. but your sentence construction was weird, its a narration and it just seems a little dis-jointed, i think. ...

(im percy jackson for halloween! so im gonna give you the review like percy would!) ok look annabeth is gonna call me soon so ill make this quick! i dont ...

okay so im gonna confess i've never seen breaking bad. i did hear about it though and your story certainly made me want to give the show a chance. it ...

first i was like i know whats gonna happen next. then i was like wait what?. because i was making the face i make when im attempting a math test ...