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Re: cryptic chicken
Bruh! I do like puzzles, but I can't solve it without any hints. I am not a famous detective, so I apologize for me being dumb. If possible, please send ...
Sep 20, 2020 -
Re: Queen
Well, I am as my name says, NoobWriter, and I am a random guy trying to make the next Classic. So, I am Crazy_Beast. First, your prose was excellent. I ...
Sep 20, 2020 -
Re: deteriorating
Hmmm.... Jealousy, interesting title. The poem is good, it gives an idea what a person. Who is the target of jealousy would think. I like this but I would also ...
Aug 3, 2020 -
Re: For Mary
I changed my reviews twice sensing they would be wrong to say here. In this I will not be reviewing the grammar as it would be disrespectful to the deceased. ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: What is your best memory as a teenager with your friends?
Aah, another good memory post. I can't make a critic out of it. Sob Sob, I am sad. Well, we all miss our memories. While some people tend to forget ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: Loving Night at the Club
A story with a bit different from the usual setting. It's good though. The description of the Earthlings with the other tribe is quite vivid. I also like the point ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: Tormented Twine
Well another good piece of art. The words are placed at the correctly and in rhythm. The poetry tells about the things we do to redeem ourselves. The flow is ...
Jul 20, 2020 -
Re: lavender and blackberry sleep | poem
The poetry is good, but I feel a bit odd while reading. "understand the important of this moment" It should be importance, important doesn't fits well. It is also quite ...
Jul 6, 2020 -
Re: U and I. U is my beloved love and I is the desperate me in love.
The first line is itself wrong. "Why do you want to live me," It can either be "leave me" or "live with me", you are either missing something or there ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: Mists of Doubt
A great piece. Pretty much relatable to what we see in real life. Climate change isn't real, Earth is going to be destroyed, Facebook leaks user's data. Oh I forgot, ...
Jul 2, 2020 -
Re: Four Walls
The poet is good, though there were some parts you could have added a rhythm. "January February, March April and May Weeks pass by while Sun dried both our skin" ...
Jun 30, 2020
