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Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 3): Unsportsmanlike Conduct
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! This seemed like a filter chapter to me. Not that I didn't enjoy it; I did. But it felt like there ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Wastelands: Chapter 1
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Just as a fair warning, I'm going to point out a lot of things that you can improve upon. Just remember, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch 2) Part 2: Birds of a Feather
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Holy heck, major cliffhanger! Quite unfortunately, I think I know what is about to happen :( Another awesome chapter! I really ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch 2) Part 1: Birds of a Feather
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! This chapter is just as good as the last one. In all honesty, I'm super impressed by your writing skills. This ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 1): Of Mosquitoes and Men
Hi there! Noelle here again for another Review Day review! Okay, so after reading this first chapter I have a better understanding about what you're main character is like. I ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 4) Part 2: King Over the Wasteland
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read the other chapters of your novel, but after reading this one I think I'll definitely go back and ...
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Re: Vampirial 4
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Ah, werewolves! Now we have a classic vampire, werewolf story. I know it's going to be better than Twilight! ;) ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial 3
Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Ah, another great chapter. I don't think I'll ever get tired of saying that! :) Anyway, you did a great job, ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial 2 (revised)
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Every corner, every crevice, was viewed by my golden eyes, which spiraled against strange, dark pupils. I really like the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Vampirial (revised)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! It starts with the violent, incessant drops of blood dripping from from my pale arm, onto the polymer fur carpet. It ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Freedom
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! How did this go so long without getting any reviews?! D: First off, I'd like to say that I was looking ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Neko of Void
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Chapter 1 The first thing I noticed is that you labeled what is a dream and what is not. And the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Darkness Falling
Hi there! Noelle, and fellow Powerpuff Girl fanatic, here for a Review Day review! Okay, so the first thing I noticed here is that you seem to have five chapter ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 9 part 1; Ky, A Hop
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I haven't read your other chapters, so I'm going to focus on grammar and the overall feel of this chapter rather ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Amber's World: Chapter Three
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! This chapter most definitely lived up to my expectations. It's a great continuation of the story! Poor Amber. I feel ...
Mar 30, 2014