Noelle

Hi there! Sorry it took me a while to get back to reviewing your novel. But I'm here now and I will read through the rest of the chapters you've ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! It took me forever, but I finally got here. (Sorry it took me so long by the way. I feel bad.) Okay, ...

Hi there! I apologize for being a terrible sage in week 3 :( I didn't get my review done in a week. Being busy isn't a good excuse. I should've ...

Hi there! You're forever promised sage feels absolutely guilty for not reviewing your thirds chapter earlier. The fact that I was busy should be no excuse. But here I am ...

Hi there! But being threatened with fire would be scary. I feel like this comes out of nowhere. She's talking about how fire makes her feel safe and then all ...

Hi there! Another great chapter :) I think Frey is my favorite character to read. I really enjoy the chapters that are written from his point of view. I think ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! Okay, so I feel terrible because I can't give you a good review. Not that it isn't possible, but this chapter is ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! Once there lived an eternal king, who never aged and who created a kingdom in a land unknown to all humans. I ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! He dragged me towards the police station. I had knocked down his colleague. The police officer looked agitated. These opening sentences really ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested! :) I'm pretty sure I read a few chapters of this novel the first time you posted this. But no matter, this ...

Hi there! This is a very informative chapter. I like how you're giving us some real insight into your main character's life. t's nice to finally dive into her past ...

Hi there! Your wisely sage has finally reached the rendezvous point that was previously discussed. She apologizes for her lateness and lack of nourishing food for the next leg of ...

Hi there! Your wisely sage is here to give you some wisely advice! Hopefully anyway XD I almost forgot about this -_- What a terrible sage I would be if ...

Hi there! Okay, so the first thing I notice about this is that it's one big paragraph. It should be broken into many little paragraphs instead of being one giant ...

Hi there! I love spring. Even though I can't see, I love the smell of the breeze that hits and the blossoms blooming. The flowers smell wonderful. Sheila says since ...