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Noelle

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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Don't Look So Forlorn - Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Okay, so I'm like, absolutely in love with your main character. The way she just goes about life, counting the hours, ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: Fallen Ashes

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. I really enjoyed this! Seriously, I think it's wonderful. There's just something about your writing that seems mature. I like the ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dingo stick at midnight under the darkness moon"

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Alright, there is definitely a lot that I can say about this piece. Keep in mind during this review though that ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Stronger: Prologue

    Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Never left her hometown of a name she never knew somewhere in the middle of Texas. I found this sentence a ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blind - Chapter 14

    Hi there! This is a nice chapter; a nice little scene about the family going to Disneyland. Now, I've been to Disney World before, but never Disneyland. In Disney World ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 13

    Hi there! Ugh. I really have to be more patient don't I? It seems like everything I've "complained" about in the earlier chapter resolves itself in the next chapter. I ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blind - Chapter 12

    Hi there! Ah! Now you've mentioned the parents. I guess I just had to be more patient. "Jason scared her about a month ago . Hasn't been talking since." You ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Blind - Chapter 11

    Hi there! The thing I really like about this chapter is how you involved Jason in this chapter. I said in a previous review that I'd like to see how ...

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Changing Bitterness

    Hi there! Okay, so you've got a promising story here. I can see that you've got a plot and characters, but you're missing some things here. I'll go through and ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Three (II)

    Hi there! Okay, so I'm trying to review novels a different way now. Not too different though. I'm just going to stay away from grammar and spelling mistakes and focus ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Renatus-chapter four

    Hi there! “Nothing useful, as you can imagine. It says here, Glass of the Clocks also known as Lady Glass in some parts was someone with the power to open ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 10

    Hi there! This is a nice little chapter. It seems like a filler chapter in the beginning, but then I found the real content later on. I like that you're ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 9

    Hi there! I just remembered what I forgot to say in my review of like, chapter 6. So I'll put it in this review since it relates to this chapter ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 8

    Hi there! I like how you linked this chapter to the last one! It's almost like you're psychic and knew that I was going to say what I just said ...

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blind - Chapter 7

    Hi there! So as this novel progresses, I've noticed two things. 1) This is 99% about Ember's life and her experiences 2) There's a new story in every chapter. Those ...

    Apr 24, 2014


Spend your days thinking about things that are good and true and beautiful and noble, and you will become good and true and beautiful and noble.
— Matthew Kelly