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Re: Don't Look So Forlorn - Chapter 1: Humble Beginnings
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Okay, so I'm like, absolutely in love with your main character. The way she just goes about life, counting the hours, ...
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Re: Fallen Ashes
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. I really enjoyed this! Seriously, I think it's wonderful. There's just something about your writing that seems mature. I like the ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Dingo stick at midnight under the darkness moon"
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Alright, there is definitely a lot that I can say about this piece. Keep in mind during this review though that ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Stronger: Prologue
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Never left her hometown of a name she never knew somewhere in the middle of Texas. I found this sentence a ...
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Re: Blind - Chapter 14
Hi there! This is a nice chapter; a nice little scene about the family going to Disneyland. Now, I've been to Disney World before, but never Disneyland. In Disney World ...
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Re: Blind - Chapter 13
Hi there! Ugh. I really have to be more patient don't I? It seems like everything I've "complained" about in the earlier chapter resolves itself in the next chapter. I ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 12
Hi there! Ah! Now you've mentioned the parents. I guess I just had to be more patient. "Jason scared her about a month ago . Hasn't been talking since." You ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 11
Hi there! The thing I really like about this chapter is how you involved Jason in this chapter. I said in a previous review that I'd like to see how ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Changing Bitterness
Hi there! Okay, so you've got a promising story here. I can see that you've got a plot and characters, but you're missing some things here. I'll go through and ...
Apr 26, 2014 -
Re: Fading Fairytales - Chapter Three (II)
Hi there! Okay, so I'm trying to review novels a different way now. Not too different though. I'm just going to stay away from grammar and spelling mistakes and focus ...
Apr 26, 2014 -
Re: Renatus-chapter four
Hi there! “Nothing useful, as you can imagine. It says here, Glass of the Clocks also known as Lady Glass in some parts was someone with the power to open ...
Apr 26, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 10
Hi there! This is a nice little chapter. It seems like a filler chapter in the beginning, but then I found the real content later on. I like that you're ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 9
Hi there! I just remembered what I forgot to say in my review of like, chapter 6. So I'll put it in this review since it relates to this chapter ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 8
Hi there! I like how you linked this chapter to the last one! It's almost like you're psychic and knew that I was going to say what I just said ...
Apr 24, 2014 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 7
Hi there! So as this novel progresses, I've noticed two things. 1) This is 99% about Ember's life and her experiences 2) There's a new story in every chapter. Those ...
Apr 24, 2014
