Noelle

Hi there! I'm back and all caught up! Weeeee! So now we're jumping into other people's perspectives. Interesting. But I'm so mad that you've left us hanging with Arianna! What ...

Hi there! I'm back :) Ah, yes, thank God Arianna is still alive. I was sure she would still be, but I really had no idea how she was going ...

Hi there! Noelle back for another Review Day review! Whoa, intense chapter you've got here. I'm impressed that you've not only made sure that we know how scared Arianna is, ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! How do you only have one review on this chapter? *shakes head* People are lame. I had to go back and ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Alright, there isn't really anything I can say about your grammar and spelling so I'm going to skip right to the ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review. When my feet touch the ground, I sprint towards my house, leaving Harrison struggling to climb down the tree. I ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review. I nod, “After examining the facts, I’ve decided that Carsten wasn’t caught.” Alright, I'm not sure how I feel about this ...

Hi there! So sorry it took me forever to get to this. I saw the noticfication and then completely forgot about it. So sorry :( Anyway, onto the review. I ...

Hi there! Finally got around to reading the rest of these chapters. Not really sure why I haven't gotten to theses earlier, but whatever. I'm here now! :) A buzz ...

Hi there! Gee, that opening paragraph looks familiar ;) Glad you got that all worked out. Those were the good old days, when there was not a care in the ...

Hi there! Oh my gosh, I am so so so sorry! I thought I reviewed this chapter already, but it turns out I didn't! D: Worse sage ever. Halfway through ...

Hi there! A cliffhanger?? Why would you do this to us?! D: Alright, so you have another chapter here in which the group is traveling. Again, you've done a great ...

Hi there! I see a cliche ;) Oh, and you fit it in there nicely too. Bravo. So I have to say that I don't normally like stories like this. ...

Hi there! Okay, so this went exactly the way I thought it would based on your first part. The teams have now come together and they're preparing to complete this ...

Hi there! First things first, your descriptions are spot on. This is only the first chapter, the first part of the first chapter even, and I already have a good ...